Friday, January 13, 2006

friday poetry blogging - ninth edition...

she rises - by me (broken ladder)

morning sun breaks
through bitter clouds
and sheds a little light
on a tiny puddle of hope
momentarily defeating
the darkness


Blogger Aelee said...

I like the lightness of the poem equated with the drive of depthful emotion..very nice,

January 14, 2006 1:26 AM  
Blogger _Soulless_ said...

Love the optimism of this piece, dear. ^_^

January 14, 2006 2:06 PM  

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